How can I improve Friesian Standing in Smoke?

I haven't zoomed in to look at focus, noise etc, but the one comment I would make is that it would be better if we could see the whole horse - the cropping on the ear and feet especially make it less pleasing than it could have been. For stock, any cropping of the main subject (even where it looks better from a composition point of view) greatly reduces usefullness to designers.

One other suggestion is that you try and add more keywords without using anything irrelevant - fog, smoke are 2 pretty obvious ones.

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