How can I improve Lucia 01 (possible strong adult content)?

Guess I will try and tackle this one, even though I have no experience in this area of photography.

First, I find the curtains, couch, stole(?) on the right, all kind of distract. Could try more of a studio type shoot with a more subtle, less harsh lighting and maybe a uniform or textured background?

Also, yuor model, while very attractive, seems to have a kind of surprised expression. Why not have her head turnd more to the left or right with a relaxed expression or even a smile, depending on the effect you are looking for.

Just my opinion, nothing more...


Edited: 04/20/2012 at 03:39 PM by Mark Hendrickson